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I Killed Myself Yesterday
Contributed by
cherrybaby12
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:00:04 PM in AEST
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I killed myself yesterday wishing I had done it now.
I Killed myself by wishing after I forgot how.
I killed myself sleeping alone and scared to stay.
I killed myself at home, yet i died so very far away.
I killed myself swimming but I was on land.
I pulled the trigger when you let go of my hand.
I killed myself crying with eyes that were dry.
I killed myself knowing I was already dead inside
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Re: I Killed Myself Yesterday
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:03:10 PM AEST
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| Sad and disturbing. Very. --theMoth |
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Re: I Killed Myself Yesterday
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by pixie on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:05:07 PM AEST
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yes very sad, and dark,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: I Killed Myself Yesterday
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by shorty_52 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:42:37 PM AEST
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good poem. but how sad. the rhyming on it was beautiful but the topic was really sad. i'm sorry if u truely feel like that. i'm here if u wanna talk sumtime.
good write. keep up the good work.
~allyson~ |
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Re: I Killed Myself Yesterday
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 07:33:49 PM AEST
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Very sad...but a great write...im sooo sorry for the pain you feel though....try to make it through this tough time in your life.
Lots of Love
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Re: I Killed Myself Yesterday
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by Heartfilledblood on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:18:39 AM AEST
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Really sad poem. I understand the feeling. I hope things get better someday for you. Great poem.
Heartfilledblood. |
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Re: I Killed Myself Yesterday
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 05:49:11 AM AEST
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full of emotion, yet so sad, so much heart rendering sorrow, i hope all gets better for you in time.
Take care
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Re: I Killed Myself Yesterday
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by carebear on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 07:09:07 PM AEST
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hey! its me again commenting on yet another of ur amazing poems for sum reason I feel like you and I can connect and I dunno why but um I really thought this one was amazing just like the other one I read you've got away with words and feelings your not afraid to show them at least not in ur writting... GOOD JOB!!!
mlnpr
Care
p.s. i have yahoo and msn if u ever wonna talk plz check out my poetry as well..Thnx |
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