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China doll
Contributed by
loopylou
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:44:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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the glazed expression on my face reflecting yours
I am a mere nothing to you
as you toss and enjoy the fall
I’m just you doll
here to help
when your world is outa control
then you leave me on the shelf
spend your days comparing me to someone else
just willing me to jump
watching and waiting
for the big fud
but there will be no fud
only as smash
as my suffering china
splinters like glass
then its over
you have no-one to hurt no more
the gleam in your eye gone
you bow down to me
as you sweep the floor
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loopylou
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2004-07-22 14:44:31]
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Re: China doll
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by pixie on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:49:49 PM AEST
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wow, great write
pixie xx |
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Re: China doll
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by Always on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:49:59 PM AEST
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| bummer, I know this feeling |
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Re: China doll
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 04:01:30 PM AEST
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| It gleams groovy, wordsmith.--the Moth |
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Re: China doll
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by xemptydecemberx on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 06:58:39 PM AEST
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| wow...thats really good. |
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Re: China doll
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 05:52:59 AM AEST
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harsh but a reality in alot of peoples lives, Awesome write, I loved it from begining to the end.
Take care
Kindredblood_dragon |
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