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Untitled.
Contributed by
xemptydecemberx
on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:15:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A fake smile welded fast to this face
Owned by a girl who feels so out of place
Not knowing what to do, she turns to the blade
This is all she can control, this pain she has made
Though she knows that its wrong, she does it still
The cuts do scar, and the pain does kill
What does it do? A sense of control
To render this heart that feels more like a hole
This pain she causes becomes all she can feel
Making all of these problems seeming surreal
Deep in depression is where she sits
Alone in her world until reality hits
You know those times when the worlds falling apart
When your searching for that button, the one marked " restart "
When you wish you could go back, and fix what you have wronged
When you know you did something, it was your fault all along
When its quiet to long, the pain sets in
When your mind starts racing, the walls seem to spin
You swear your going crazy but the one cut ends the ride
When you do it once, but want it more, you run away and hide
You wanna stop but dont know how to, things seem so tough
When you never understand why these times are so rough
Your falling apart, and cant stop the shattering
All the things you love cease mattering
You want out, the only way
You cannot do this, you cannot stay
When you want help but no one can
When you try and fail all over again
Her pain she bears destroys her soul
This life it feels like someone has stole
Not knowing anyway but to end it all
Failure after failure, fall after fall
Night after night she battles with her mind
The sunrise tomorrow is what she needs to find
Closing up cuts, cleaning them well
Preparing for tomorrow, another day in hell
Copyright ©
xemptydecemberx
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2004-07-22 13:15:55]
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Re: Untitled.
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by screwup on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 05:06:33 PM AEST
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Great write...i loved it a little too much...
got a title suggestion..."Trapped". I know it sounds original, but it was all I could think of reading this poem. |
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Re: Untitled.
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by xemptydecemberx on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 05:50:24 PM AEST
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| no, thats the origionality i was looking for, i like that alot. thank you |
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Re: Untitled.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 07:02:51 PM AEST
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Sometimes we are our hardest critics. I hope you will continue to try to stop the cutting as it only adds to other possible problems. Try to be kinder to yourself and stronger in your will to help and understand what is causing this to happen. You can overcome it. You are a good poet.
Rita |
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