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Chin Up Babes
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:49:31 PM in AEST
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I know things are getting to you,
Making you down & feel quite blue,
You have been badly let down,
Feel like crying the tears of a clown.
But I am here to help my best friend,
I have all the time in the world to spend,
Helping you to get back on your feet,
Making your life feel altogether complete.
I will chase away the clouds in your sky,
Make you sodden cheeks so dry,
Fill your heart with joy & laughter,
So we can live happily ever after.
You are such a decent, loving man,
& will do all that I possibly can,
To keep a smile upon your face,
One that this life can never erase.
So please keep your chin up hun,
Our battle for the future has almost been won,
We are close enough , hold my hand,
As we walk into our own land.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-22 12:49:31]
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Re: Chin Up Babes
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:54:41 PM AEST
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Awww, this is so sweet.
You will make it through it all.
And it will be better for you in the end.
Great write,
I know how much you're going through.
Stary strong, much love,
Phil xxx
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Re: Chin Up Babes
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:05:55 PM AEST
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Beautiful verse filled with hope and compassion...wonderfully composed.
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Re: Chin Up Babes
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:28:45 PM AEST
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awww.... so loving and sweet, a truely beautiful poem, i do love your poetry so much, keep 'em coming:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Chin Up Babes
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:24:41 PM AEST
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Such a compassionate and caring poem....very encouraging...
Hugs ya...
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Re: Chin Up Babes
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by venkat on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 03:07:30 AM AEST
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| Soo loving and caring.. very sweet..:-) venkat |
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Re: Chin Up Babes
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 02:54:51 AM AEST
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AwwwPixie, this poem is so upbuilding, so encouraging......filled with hope.
Touching another person's heart and making them feel better is the dearest thing in all the world.
This will always be one of my favorites,
Love you
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