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A dream within a dream
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:25:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Was that you in there
Or was it just a dream
I wanted to run
Then I saw you
____________
So much has happend
These pictures are no longer true
I wish this was the dream
And I was with you
But for all the nights that were black
now turns to blue
My savior I have failed to make
any other than you
I have failed to make a difference
from black and you
____________
light & day
you are they
bringing smile to me
leaving me alittle bit
happy
_____________
Chasing sleep and space
Scrabbling my memories for you
Searching home and faith
But knowing the past is erased
_____________
If only the dream was real
And this was when I was asleep
Then I would love the feel
And learn how to keep
Everything I took for granted
If only you weren't the dream
I could sleep with these things
Rather than feeling torn
And praise you like the queen
Instead of taking you for granted
____________
I have......hurt.you.....I have......tried.you.....have.....bled.....for.my.....life.
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rhei76
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2004-07-22 12:25:04]
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Re: A dream within a dream
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:25:34 PM AEST
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| Very effective ending. Groovy. As a Poe fan I also compliment you on having the kintama--or cajones, if you prefer--to call it A Dream Within A Dream.--the Moth |
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Re: A dream within a dream
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 07:07:54 PM AEST
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A wonderfully thought provoking poem.
I enjoyed it very much.
~Breezy |
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Re: A dream within a dream
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:57:18 PM AEST
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Very interesting write. I enjoyed it immensely..
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