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Tell me
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:02:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Somehow I knew
That it would end like this
Deep inside I knew
That it was our last kiss
Tell me if you think
I’m over-exaggerating
Tell me if you think my options
Are even worth debating
Our castle in the sky
Is crumbling to the ground
I feel as if I’m losing
The best thing I have found
The things I said and did
Were cruel, this, I know
If I kept them any longer
I felt I would explode
I’ve never felt this way before
This pain is so much worse
You are my souls water
I feel I’ll die of thirst
Please tell me that you think
I’m over-exaggerating (This isn’t the end)
Please tell me that you think
They’re always worth debating (That we’re at least friends)
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_Raspberry_
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2004-07-22 11:02:29]
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Re: Tell me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:12:43 AM AEST
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Don't ever be afraid to show your feelings and speak your heart - only bad things happen when you keep them inside.
nice write. |
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Re: Tell me
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by Sagacious on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:27:33 AM AEST
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| I find one of the hardest things in life is knowing when to pursue righting wrongs, and when to let those you care about simply be what they need to be. Your poem captures that indecision well. -KAC- |
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Re: Tell me
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by pixie on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:39:39 AM AEST
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awww very sad write,...... filled with emotions,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Tell me
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by JT on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:08:55 PM AEST
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emotional write. hope things turn out alright.
-jt- |
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