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Hand and hand
Contributed by
brew
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:30:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Hand in hand
Woman and Man
The two together
Walking the land
Each sees different things
But each belief are the same
The look,feel and caress
Knowing that each is the best
Sights and sounds they do not adhere
For as they have their own so clear
The two make, as a whole
Knowing they are forever a hold
Looking in the eyes, that make the soul
Seeing what each one has to hold
Dreams and thoughts make them smile
And the reality gives them all their style
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Re: Hand and hand
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:33:36 AM AEST
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Hand in hand, thought in thought, across the land, across the time and space. To dream and wish if only afar, tis a beam of light and a joyous delight to see a smiling star.
Excellent and beautiful, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Hand and hand
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by C2C on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:24:35 AM AEST
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That's a cute poem. Makes me smile when i read it. I like the fact that you point out how different they are but by being different it makes them whole. Nice job.
~Tuesday~ |
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Re: Hand and hand
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by PoeticMystery on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 07:23:51 PM AEST
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| Yes, it made me smile, also. Enjoyed this very much..Very sweet...True feelings and well explained of two people in love =o) I've felt this way once... |
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Re: Hand and hand
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:08:01 PM AEST
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Your word visuals are good. I enjoyed this piece immensely. I like the way you pointed out the contrast in view points but told how it made no difference in the joining as a couple.
Rita |
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Re: Hand and hand
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 08:12:33 PM AEST
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very sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Hand and hand
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by Stellar on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 11:00:55 AM AEST
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This is so pretty and such a tribute to love and soul mates.
Beautifully written!
Take care! |
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Re: Hand and hand
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by Darkhorse71 on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:49:42 PM AEST
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Once again an awesome topic well described. I love the hopefulness and purity of your vision. Thanks brew.
hugs, john |
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