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I just wanted to cry
Contributed by
gery_giggles
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:48:26 AM in AEST
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I walked away,
leaving him to wonder why,
baby i just wanted to cry.
My world keeps falling apart,
and i dont have enough grace
to put it together.
I love you though,your my everything,
there was just nothing you could do,
i just wanted to cry,
i didnt want you to wipe the tears away.
I walked away,
leaving you to wonder,
I'll be back once my eyes show no pain,
I'll hold you so close,
baby you are what keeps my alive,
but the tears i cry need to dry alone.
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Re: I just wanted to cry
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:08:18 AM AEST
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Sometimes we need the time, to cry the tears, and to face the fears, to know the hurt, and to feel the pain, and they not knowing seem to take the blame. No one knows except for us, a time to take, a time to be, alone to cry just for us.
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Re: I just wanted to cry
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by hooray_its_jen on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:40:35 AM AEST
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Very beautiful and emotional write. I understand how you feel, sometimes we just need to be alone, even when people are only trying to help. We need to work things out on our own sometimes, without them trying to do it all for us. Again, very nice write. 5 stars!
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Re: I just wanted to cry
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by pixie on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:48:59 AM AEST
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this is such a sad and emotional write...hang in there girl, *hugs you*
pixie xx |
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Re: I just wanted to cry
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 07:45:34 PM AEST
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This is sad but i can relate...great write...i like it alot
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: I just wanted to cry
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 07:51:58 PM AEST
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immense sadness, it just jumps right out at your readers, i guess sometimes we need to be alone but its comforting to know loving arms await you:) hugs n' love nessa
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