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Numb on a mountain of nails
Contributed by
LoserLottie
on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 05:44:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I知 numb on a mountain of nails,
I知 boiling and covered in frost,
I知 so hopeless at looking,
That must be why I知 still lost.
I知 trying to hit a vacant space,
I知 crowded in an empty room,
I知 walking west and running east,
I知 in a bud, but in full bloom.
I知 awake while I知 sleeping,
I知 talking in mid silence,
I知 listening to something I値l never know,
I知 upset with excitement.
Copyright ﾂｩ
LoserLottie
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2004-07-22 05:44:04]
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Re: Numb on a mountain of nails
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 06:10:49 AM AEST
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I go in circles and round and round, my name is wind and sometimes found, but mostly just end up going round and round.
Very nice poem, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Numb on a mountain of nails
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by brew on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:46:27 AM AEST
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| As you see and feel, but can not touch.......how can that be, its too much. Oh How do I know the feeling . Nice piece of anology! Thank you! |
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