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Words Of Love
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:12:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You fall in love with someone
it happened overnight
The words you heard, the things you saw
it was love, at first sight
It didn't take long for the two of you
to say those loving words
I love you my darling
was just what you both heard
How wonderful it is
to hear this everyday
The first thing in the morning
what the two of you both say
I love you my precious love
and you will always be
The first and last thing on my mind
and I love you totally
Forever and a day
this love will go on and on
In each others arms
is where we both belong
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-07-22 02:12:02]
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Re: Words Of Love
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 04:01:11 AM AEST
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Tis not the first sight I had troubles with, but upon second sight I did have a fright, from then on only did I see, that first sight and nevermore forever and ever and a day.
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Re: Words Of Love
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 04:10:42 AM AEST
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Wonderful flow and rhyme.....This is such a soft and romantic verse....Brilliantly composed..
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Re: Words Of Love
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by AliB on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 05:05:52 AM AEST
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Another beautiful poem, well done again. Thanks for the pm, I know he's out there somewhere, just don't know where to start looking lol.
Ali xx |
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Re: Words Of Love
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:24:46 PM AEST
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awww... this is beautiful bruce! everyone deserves happiness and love:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Words Of Love
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 04:45:50 PM AEST
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Another lovely one here, Bruce....
Thanks for sharing....
Jenni |
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