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Roxbury Falls
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 10:45:31 PM in AEST
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Winding slowly along between the trees
Memories rush back to me
Of long ago times when we were there
Of you, of me
And what we shared
Then down the bank and towards the rocks
My senses heighten, taking stock
Of familiar sounds serenading me
The water, falling
The rustle of leaves
O’er rocks in shapes that make no sense
Full of holes and strange crevices
Of many desperate, stagnant pools
Filled with the tears
Of a lovesick fool
I sat there alone until the sun fell down
Dreaming as the moon came ‘round
Of one day again returning here
With you, my love
Some distant year
For the moon, the water, the rocks and me
Are aching with the memory
Of long ago days and selfless love
Of laughter, dreams
And all that was
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 10:50:47 PM AEST
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Ah, wishful thinking and nostalgic thoughts.
You've captured it so well.
Bravo SNM, I think you're truly a talented writer. |
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 10:54:35 PM AEST
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i really love this poem, it has really good flow and meaning and it's complete. wonderful :)
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:06:41 PM AEST
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Very nice job, and a picture of a fond memory or two.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:09:58 PM AEST
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gently well woven words that come to fit perfectly into memory of another time, place and someone dear..... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:06:14 AM AEST
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you conjured up some nice images in this write and bought back a flash of nostalgia for me. Thanks and well done.
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by nexxa on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:35:25 AM AEST
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So sweet and gentle and painful as well
what a beautiful poem and I love the fact that you are silent no more even when its painful
well done!!!
nexxa |
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by paula_kay23 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:28:31 AM AEST
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they say better to have loved and lost than never loved at all.
what do they know? lol
good poem though, enjoyed reading it, hope you find your lost love,x |
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:08:43 PM AEST
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Awwww hunni!!
*hugs you lots*
This is so sad....
Memories eh? they cause us such pain yet we hang onto them as hard as we can.
Some gorgeous images of him my friend.
An amazing write.
Much love and hugs, Phil xxx |
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:22:34 PM AEST
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I love the style, very well written, and full of remorse.
It's ok to stop and remember, but don't forget to keep moving on. |
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 07:30:40 PM AEST
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Memories.. so many memories, the only human biological link the the past we lived filled with tears and laughter, love and sorrow, pain and happiness, and yet no matter how long ago it happened those right memeories always seem like yesterday, something are beautiful about the human mind, but they always come with such a high price, why is it so many of these memeories are the ones that make us cry.
I feel your ever word like i spoke them myself, talent is a gift that we should use to brighten the days of all those around us, i think you just created the sun my friend
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by pvd on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:56:27 PM AEST
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This poem makes me wish I was there.
But, the ending grabs with
"For the moon, the water, the rocks and me
Are aching with the memory
Of long ago days and selfless love
Of laughter, dreams
And all that was"
Good piece. |
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by tifrob on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 12:58:08 AM AEST
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That was absolutly beautiful. It was even styled beautifully. Thanks.
J~ |
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:39:52 AM AEST
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Of many desperate, stagnant pools
Filled with the tears
Of a lovesick fool
very nicely done.
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:00:55 PM AEST
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*jaw drops*
*stays dropped*
*is stunned*
Absolutely breath-taking . . . poignant, beautiful, powerful, and really quite perfect. Your talent shines through here and it's a pleasure to behold. And the last stanza is just amazing.
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:30:51 PM AEST
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| Nostalgia written so gracefully and in a seemingly peaceful state of mind. Love lost is, to me, better than no love at all, no matter how painful. Wishing you much love in the future. |
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by ExoticDreamer on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:55:23 PM AEST
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| Truly moving to tears. Hopes and dreams, dashed and before you know it, just a memory of what one hoped may be. Oh you have such a way with words. |
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 09:33:18 AM AEST
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I have walked through similar memories. Letting to and moving forward is so hard. That's achingly obvious here, and yet there is a sense of hope. I like it.
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Re: Roxbury Falls
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 12:24:14 AM AEST
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Never being disappointed when I visit your page
Discovered, signed, sealed, contract anew
You come along with some chosen few
Snemma, should be a publisher's rage
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