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ADRIFT
Contributed by
frostman56
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:45:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The shore’s within view but no way to get there,
To the warmth that its arms will provide;
The way is laid out in front of my heart,
Clear, no rocks with which to collide;
Adrift on the sea, alone and so cold,
Can’t reach what’s so close yet so far;
The tide pulls me further from the comfort that’s there,
The curse of a love unreachable as a star.
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2004-07-21 21:45:21]
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Re: ADRIFT
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by RavenShadows on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:41:08 PM AEST
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| Oh the frustration. It makes me sad as I feel the emotion of seeing the prize with a clear path and not being able to reach it. Very nice. |
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Re: ADRIFT
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:54:38 AM AEST
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You've expressed the pain that love can bring, so deeply.
This is a lovely poem. |
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