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Losing My Life
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:28:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Losing My Life
I've tried
I've cried
I've bled
For this life
I have given
Everything I could
For nothing
I've given my life
For more time
I've failed
I've lost
For this life
I have lost
Everything I could
For nothing
I've lost my life
Only to die
I've tried
I've failed
To live life
I've given everything
Only to be losing
The time to be living
What was worth having
I'm losing my life
Only to die
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Essentially9
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2004-07-21 21:28:39]
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Re: Losing My Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:33:44 PM AEST
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depressing but understanding...
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Re: Losing My Life
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by RavenShadows on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:50:07 PM AEST
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| How sad but understandable. I have been where you are. I have felt the same feelings. |
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Re: Losing My Life
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:24:42 AM AEST
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this poem really moves me, touches inside, hang in there, and im here if youd like to ever talk:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Losing My Life
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by xemptydecemberx on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:18:06 PM AEST
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| sad.. |
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