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Worry
Contributed by
juggalette_chick666pk
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 07:45:02 PM in AEST
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You said I wouldn't have to worry about a thing,
I guess you lied cause I worry about it,
Things have been changing,
I don't want them too,
I feel like I'm living in a prison,
Stuck in the same place for all of enternity,
The world is changing around me,
But I'm still here,
Things change and get better,
But not for me,
I sit in my room every night just wondring what will happen,
will I die tommarow,
Somtimes I wish for death to take me sooner rather than later,
My scars will be here untill I die,
Die,
I want to die.
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Re: Worry
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by Shadow on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:16:58 PM AEST
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| Harsh. The strom endures the night by light shall bask in the day. What more can be said? I've had alot of hurt as well. It's hard to endure but it makes you stronger. Whats best for you comes in good time. I liked the poem. This was very good and deep in so many levels. good wright. Just remember what i wrote here. |
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Re: Worry
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:00:42 PM AEST
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hey, times seem rough now but try to think of your future. things will keep changing but soon you'll start to find that some of them are good changes. may not seem like it now, but you have to try and think ahead
i wish you luck,
acy |
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Re: Worry
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by RavenShadows on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:54:51 PM AEST
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| Very deep and understandable. Pain is what makes us who we are. It is what gives us our character and personality. Very good poem. |
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Re: Worry
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by hooray_its_jen on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:39:33 PM AEST
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Great write, keep writing
~Jen |
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Re: Worry
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:28:26 PM AEST
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wow....i can relate to this poem soo well....its amazing...great write!!!!
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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