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Explain My Story
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 05:34:46 PM in AEST
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Explain my story
Can you see through me?
See the story of my sadness?
If you can please explain it to me
If I can hear you through the madness.
Can you see the real me?
The writer in my soul?
Can you hear my heart beating,
Out of my control?
Can you hear my song,
That rings desperately in my head?
Can you see the part of me
That to so many eyes is dead?
Can you bring it alive?
Breathe life into the dead….
Is it possible?
Can you feel me getting weak?
Is this poem to you logical?
Or do I confuse the mind that
Is not my own?
Have you in circles dancing?
Can you break the barrier of my words?
And finish my puzzle that’s been waiting?
Can you see through me?
See the story of my sadness?
If you can please explain it to me
If you can reach me through the madness…
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xxbreathlessx
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Re: Explain My Story
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 08:41:30 PM AEST
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Just to be something to someone, even if for only a blink, a smile, a glance, maybe just a wink....kind word, loving thought, anything good......but mostly to share and be understood.
Very nice write, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Explain My Story
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by hooray_its_jen on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:41:06 PM AEST
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Very nice write, thanks so much for sharing!
~Jenna |
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Re: Explain My Story
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by darkplaidbabe on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 04:10:19 PM AEST
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awesome poem. i myself still cant seem to comprehend the events and reasons for my suck ass life (excuse my language). i understand what you are saying. so many questions with seemingly no anwers.
keep writing!!
Brynna |
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