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Don't yell at me!
Contributed by
WestCPunk
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 05:21:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Don't you * yell at me
Can't you just see
That I never did a single thing to you
Only if you knew
What I could possibly do
You need to get real
So here's the deal
No more endless yelling
Less fighting
No more * drinking
And maybe I'll stop screaming
No more bruises
Or broken fuses
No more bashed in walls
Or deadly falls
I don't wanna hear what you gotta say
It's just another one of those days
You look me in the eye
And all you do is lie
I don't want anymore broken dreams
This life is nothing what it seems
You look at all this
And wish
You had every last bit of it
But trust me you don't want it
Someday
I'll get my way
And I won't ever have to deal with you
And your * up attitude
You get what comes to you
After all the **** you put me through
I'll make sure you get it all back hard to
And that's the * truth!
Copyright ©
WestCPunk
... [
2004-07-21 17:21:23]
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Re: Don't yell at me!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:35:50 AM AEST
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It has a nice flow to it, and the simplistic rhymes don't really get in the way of what's there to be understood.
Coherent warning.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Don't yell at me!
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by darkplaidbabe on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 04:06:33 PM AEST
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great write! its so raw and truthful. i know exactly how you feel. i look forward to more of this.
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Re: Don't yell at me!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:04:31 AM AEST
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| I loved this poem. The anger in your words is raw and emotional. You are a very gifted poet. I liked this poem a lot. |
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