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HAUNTED BY THE DEMONS!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:02:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Haunted by the demons around me...
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I’m walking down the street.
Scared of know I’ll meet.
Some that see me stare.
While others stop and glare.
I’m feeling pretty faint.
And no one can relate.
Emotionally feeling destroyed.
Sucked dry and maybe a little paranoid.
Any noise is SO loud!
… I run through out the crowds…
There are different voices,
In different tones.
I’m surrounded by others,
But still feeling SO alone!!!
Feeling so scared,
I’ll be attacked.
Beaten and bruised,
Or rapped and smacked…!
There’s an echo behind me.
I quickly turn round.
The looks surround me.
They boom out their sound…
Then I hear sirens,
From behind my head.
My stomach grips in panic,
And fear breaks loose, filling me with dread…
I ran away from it!
My heart beating fast.
I kept thinking that any second,
My breath could be my last.
“Any one could jump me,
And beat me until I bleed”.
“And the crowds would mean nothing,
Because they’re demons around me!!!”
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deathdrop
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2004-07-21 16:02:56]
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Re: HAUNTED BY THE DEMONS!
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:28:08 PM AEST
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this poem moves so well up to its conclusion, good work kinda makes me feel paranoid!
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Re: HAUNTED BY THE DEMONS!
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 08:55:05 PM AEST
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And deathdrop you are probably right for the demons use people here on earth to get to us! This was a very fast moving poem, and scared me too! I've felt the same panic in my younger life manytimes.
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Re: HAUNTED BY THE DEMONS!
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:04:20 PM AEST
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| excellent write. =] |
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