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my haven my heaven
Contributed by
paula_kay23
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:02:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I like to sit here alone sometimes
To watch the sun as she climbs
I feel the peace and serenity
Where the world cant bother me
As the waves crash upon the shore
I am warm to my very core
The morning chill in the air
Is so crisp and yet, so fair
I watch as I slide my hands
Through the soft delicate sand
The orange light that shines above
Fills me with hope, peace and love
I feel the fresh morning breeze
Watch it blowing in the trees
I feel calm I want to stay
In a place where thoughts go astray
This is my haven a lonely place
Where life goes at a slower pace
To be where the sky meets the sea
And life is far away as can be
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2004-07-21 16:02:29]
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Re: my haven my heaven
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:16:31 PM AEST
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this is beautiful:) warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: my haven my heaven
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by Pyrochick on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:23:33 PM AEST
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Everyone wants to go to a place like that evry once in awhile. very beautiful.
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Re: my haven my heaven
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:23:37 PM AEST
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sounds like a great place to be a beautiful write.
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Re: my haven my heaven
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:51:05 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC! What a lovely first post. I absolutely agree... I'd give just about anything at this very moment to be alone for a moment "where the sky meets the sea".
Lovely write! Looking forward to reading more of your work,
SNM |
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Re: my haven my heaven
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 10:17:02 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece. Let me know where this place is when you find it, eh?
And a warm welcome to YPDC.
Andrew |
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Re: my haven my heaven
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:52:55 PM AEST
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I see that you have visited my island....lol...
Welcome to YPDC..... Hope to see many more of your lovely poems... This one sure is great!!! I enjoyed it greatly...
Thank you for sharing...
Jenni |
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Re: my haven my heaven
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 10:16:41 PM AEST
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Welcome... to YPDC... I think I find this place every time I write... it's like my own litle world that Iclimb into... beautiful write... well expressed...
~Donna~ |
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