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The corrupt and the dirty
Contributed by
little_genna
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:54:36 PM in AEST
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Walking in the dark I find my self back at pains beckon call.
Feeling as I begin to fall,
All I can see is the dense darkness rushing past me.
Why is this happening to me?
I was almost free, yet it has grabbed me with its black hands again,
Pulling at me making me feel so much pain.
I stumble forwards, into a puddle of hurt,
Covered in the corrupt dirt.
No matter how hard I try I cannot break these bounds.
I cry aloud but nothing sounds.
The corruptness and dirtiness close in on me,
Yet I am seen by only me.
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2004-07-21 15:54:36]
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Re: The corrupt and the dirty
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 06:31:11 AM AEST
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Tis when we all get up.....brush the dust off....and start the coffee......and another fine day on the way.
Very nice write, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: The corrupt and the dirty
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by pixie on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:07:29 AM AEST
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great write Genna...*hugs you*
pixie xx |
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