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5 Days
Contributed by
emeraldeyes
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:23:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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5 Days...of almost dead...
5 days...of silence in my head...
all it took to erase parts of my mind
crushing me
breaking me
almost blind
Awoke to tragedy on day 6
I'm not here
I am gone
too much to fix
too much to remember
I don't wanna know
let me be- just let me go.
18 more days...of sadness like this
18 days...of learning what reality is
Starting over...old becomes new
I try to accept what I cannot do
Falling away like ashes and dust
My life
I will live
I'll do it
I must
a new me will start over
a new me will begin
5 days....
didn't cause my days to end....
Copyright ©
emeraldeyes
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2004-07-21 15:23:01]
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Re: 5 Days
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by Calista on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:26:07 PM AEST
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this is beautiful! its very sad, but wonderfully writen, i hope you feel better
~Calista |
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Re: 5 Days
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by paula_kay23 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:43:36 PM AEST
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i enjoyed reading this poem, i felt the style of the poem was unique, and it gave an insight to deep emotions felt after such a traumatic experiance,
well done |
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