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Our Future Awaits
Contributed by
lovespoetic0518
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:15:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your face appears
In dreams I steer,
As my mind flies,
So we soar the skies.
Wander with me,
Hearts spin carefree,
Our eyes unite,
Under luminary light.
Soul mates I perceive,
Oh, spirit please believe,
We’re ready for fate,
For our future awaits.
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Re: Our Future Awaits
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by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:29:09 PM AEST
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Beautifully rhymed...love the line.."Hearts spin carefree"....wonderfully composed.
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Re: Our Future Awaits
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:02:39 PM AEST
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nice and to the point, almost like a long haiku if there was such a thing! well done.
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Re: Our Future Awaits
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:25:52 PM AEST
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this is lovely, and flows very well.
wonderful,
acy |
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Re: Our Future Awaits
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by dedosser on
Tuesday, 7th September 2010 @ 11:06:50 PM AEST
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| i like it apart from the lines 'under luminary light' and the final two lines which are lame. good work! |
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