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All my Fault
Contributed by
Beni
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:49:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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They always row,
i know its my fault,
thats what SHE tells me,
thats why i feel horrible,
thats why i cant live,
I dont want to live,
Its my fault he went there,
To that horrible place,
I dont deserve to live,
One slit on each wrist and i'm done,
one cut to the throat and im gone.
Good luck to the life that i once had,
Good luck to the family that i never had,
Goodbye to the mum,
who had never loved me,
Hello to the man,
who i sent here,
to heaven,
my dad.
Copyright ©
Beni
... [
2004-07-21 13:49:55]
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Re: All my Fault
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by Babigurl on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:14:45 PM AEST
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| I hope you are not plannign to do anything to yourself its a good poem keep it up |
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Re: All my Fault
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by Stoney1 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:19:26 PM AEST
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Well...the preamble is right out of Orwellian Newspeak, but the poem
observes conventional spelling and isn't half bad.
I was going to suggest seeing a priest, and that you'd probably be
alright as long as you kept him on his side of the confessional screen.
But then I managed to decipher the preamble and saw that it's just a
typical teenage rant against 'tyrannical' parents.*g*
Stoney
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Re: All my Fault
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:06:20 PM AEST
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pouring out emotion is so much better than pouring out blood, least you'll live to write more good poetry keep 'em coming!
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Re: All my Fault
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by xemptydecemberx on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:10:33 PM AEST
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| definitly a good poem. keep em coming |
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