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Would Anyone Notice?
Contributed by
AliB
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:32:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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If I wasn't at school anymore
Picking up my kids
Would anyone notice
And wonder where I'd gone?
If I no longer posted a comment or a poem
Or contributed to YPDC
Would there be a special forum
Asking if anybody had heard from me?
If my car was no longer parked outside my house
Would anyone notice?
If I dyed my hair green
Would I then be seen?
I'm starting to bore myself
I know how everybody else must feel
I've got no fresh thoughts or ideas
I'm not special in the eyes of any man
I'm getting older and STILL on my own
What's out there for me?
I'm going nowhere fast
Yeah, I know I'm feeling sorry for myself
That's one thing I do very well
I will snap out of it
Maybe
But at this moment in time
I sit here by myself
Wondering
Would anyone notice?
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AliB
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Re: Would Anyone Notice?
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:36:43 PM AEST
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yes we would notice hun, *hugs you* I am feeling quite sorry for myself too at the mo,
great write, straight from the heart,
pixie xx |
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Re: Would Anyone Notice?
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:39:55 PM AEST
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awww ali!! i would notice and everyone else here would too!!! *big hugs* hang in there my friend, lotsa love nessa
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Re: Would Anyone Notice?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:16:44 PM AEST
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just starting the Alib forum now! (only joking) i'd notice! your the only person to write a poem about me! ( a printable one anyway)
all the best
wildejohnny or is it wildej? |
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Re: Would Anyone Notice?
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:46:17 PM AEST
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| Good poem, keep up the good work!--the Moth |
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Re: Would Anyone Notice?
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by paula_kay23 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:57:47 PM AEST
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i found your poem to be a bit choppy in places, but still it was interesting to read.
i think we all feel this from time to time and it was good to see some one voicing these feelings.
i myself now know i am not alone when i feel down, thanx.
p.s you have to feel sorry for your self, nobody else will!!!! |
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Re: Would Anyone Notice?
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by Dawny on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 06:36:04 PM AEST
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Awwhhhh Ali ((((((GREAT BIG HUGS)))))))
I would notice!!!! I would miss my fwend xx
I waited nearly 10 years for Marky, and when I found him I had given up looking!!!! You are a wonderful kind and caring person, and I know there is someone for you hun. We will start looking Saturday 21st mate.
Cheer up mate, I'm here if you want to talk to rant babe
Love Dawny xxx
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Re: Would Anyone Notice?
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 10:43:50 PM AEST
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Funny I was just thinking of this today!
All the things I do for my kids but it never seems to be noticed ! i wonder to my friend great write! Christina |
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Re: Would Anyone Notice?
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by Bruce on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:22:33 PM AEST
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| i would, and never get down on yourself, you have to much to offer the world and that special someone will turn up. go get im and never ever give up on yourself or LIFE |
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