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I Want You, I Need You, I Love You
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:00:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You are the wind beneath my wings,
You are the one who makes my soul sing,
You are the voice inside my head,
You are the reason I don’t want to be dead.
I want you, I need you, I love you,
Without you what would I do?
Take me into your loving world,
Wrap me in your arms I am your girl.
I want you like nothing before,
I adore you of that I am so sure,
You to me are so wonderful & magical,
For us to be together is more than logical.
I need you like a dessert needs rain,
You heal & take away all my pain,
Show me that life is for living,
& that cuddles are for giving.
I love you & all that you are,
You and I are destined to go far,
Love is much more than a four letter word,
All around the land our love can be heard.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-21 13:00:25]
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Re: I Want You, I Need You, I Love You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:14:28 PM AEST
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| sweet and lovely. It is interesting to follow your poems - you put it all out there. Nice job. |
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Re: I Want You, I Need You, I Love You
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by xemptydecemberx on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:15:56 PM AEST
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| very good poem. keep it up. |
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Re: I Want You, I Need You, I Love You
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by kammie on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:23:22 PM AEST
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its beautiful in every way shape and form its sooo gentle and your love shows through your words
kammie xx |
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Re: I Want You, I Need You, I Love You
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:40:49 PM AEST
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| Very sweet, like a Japanese pop song, couldn't be more honest and pure. |
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Re: I Want You, I Need You, I Love You
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by AliB on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:54:51 PM AEST
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Truely beautiful, wish somebody felt like that about me, keep writing, take care.
Ali xx |
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Re: I Want You, I Need You, I Love You
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by luckycharm on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:57:11 PM AEST
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| That poem was very touching and beautiful. Keep writing and keep up the good work!!!.-luckycharm. |
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Re: I Want You, I Need You, I Love You
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:26:46 PM AEST
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pixie babe this is beautiful just like the person that wrote it. your love just shines through your words.your guy is very lucky to be loved as much as he is! *hugs you*
love
Gen xx |
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Re: I Want You, I Need You, I Love You
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by pvd on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:34:18 PM AEST
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Very brave and fearless about your feelings.
You bare your soul. Kudos to you. |
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Re: I Want You, I Need You, I Love You
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:44:33 PM AEST
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absolutely gorgeous poem! from your heart, filled with such deep love, truely a masterpiece:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: I Want You, I Need You, I Love You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:26:24 PM AEST
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packed with emotion an excellent write.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: I Want You, I Need You, I Love You
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 05:58:15 PM AEST
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Oh Pixie dear, I'm so happy for you and your new love.
This poem is written so carefully, and feeling..are intense........I pray everything turns out OK? Perhaps this really is your Soul mate......please don't get hurt........but then on the other hand.......how can you not. For you must kiss many frogs until you find your one and only Prince
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 10:45:09 PM AEST
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| Well your on a great start this is how I feel for my husband so I know it will work for you! Good luck! Christina |
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