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Picture Perfect
Contributed by
xemptydecemberx
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 12:43:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I cut deep in this picture perfect skin
It's like nothing I imagined, the perfect sin
Ending one and starting another
The rush of adrenaline like no other
I trace around this picture perfect life
Trace so steadily with this blood covered knife
Every thought bottled inside tears me more
Its like theres nothing left worth living for
I live it all this picture perfect way
Where life is a game im forced to play
When you kill yourself to escape the cold
So you didn't feel your dignity had been sold
These picture perfect lines lay so straight
The scars I soon grow to hate
Confused inside this picture perfect mind
Not sure whats left for me to find
Im lost somewhere between my wrist and this blade
Regretting every mistake I've ever made
Im ending now this picture perfect day
In this life now I can no longer stay.
-6/9/04
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2004-07-21 12:43:19]
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:38:34 PM AEST
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awww *hugs you* great write, filled with raw emotion, very sad, I am sorry that you feel this way.... keep strong and keep on writing,
pixie xx |
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:10:28 PM AEST
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Woah...One of the better poems I've read in this category. Very discriptive and great flow of words.
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:04:24 PM AEST
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***** excelltn nice flow i can relate to this its *****in brilliant thank you liek write some more soojn yeh
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:52:50 PM AEST
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not my favourite subject! but this is an exeptional poem. Excellent.
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by lilblkcat on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:31:34 AM AEST
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| wow. when i read this poem it blew my mind. you made me feel as if those were the thoughts in my head. its an excellent poem. |
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by screwup on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 05:18:52 PM AEST
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| wow...this poem is amazing...in so many ways. Picture perfect has alot to say... |
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