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Adrift
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 12:21:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I wish upon a wish,
I dream upon a dream,
Alas hope is all adrift,
Fate floats upon the winds.
My gaze upon the weave,
My steps upon the line,
But the future oft deceives,
Tomorrows doth decline.
I fly up to the clouds,
I rise up to the sun,
Never knowing all throughout,
The fall will be my end.
I plunge into the sea,
I dive into dismay,
Its plain as it can be,
Despair's the only way.
I set my self adrift,
I left my soul asleep,
No ambitions to conceive,
No troubles to defeat.
I live upon a life,
I sit upon a sigh,
No future to realize,
Surviving by and by.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2004-07-21 12:21:29]
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Re: Adrift
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:17:22 PM AEST
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excellent flow, beautiful poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Adrift
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 08:14:00 PM AEST
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You never cease to amaze me Baronhawk.....adrift from life.....is so true in many respects.....and like the ending....100 years from now.......who's going to know or care?
Good way to live if you don't let time catch up with you!
Great write.....my mind wandered with yours everywhere.......here, there and everywhere. and what I get from this meandering is this....Why take life so seriously....we all just end up dying!
Poetic hugs
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Re: Adrift
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:53:03 PM AEST
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This was wonderful, looks like we're all drifting away from life anyway.
I could relate to this so well.
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