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The Fire and rain
Contributed by
Kirby
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:42:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Watching the rain pour down.
Hitting my window like tears.
Pounding the glass as fire.
Trying to break into my world.
I've heard so much about love.
That you have to work hard.
Let things slide.
But watch out for the lightning.
Well the lightning has struck my world.
Leaving smoldering ash on everything.
Making my nights longer then ever.
Wondering how to put out this fire.
The lightning was made by you.
My tears come down like the rain.
Yet the only one that can save me,
Is you and the boat you built me.
No matter how much the rain pours.
It will wash away the ashes.
Just as long as I 've got you.
Nothing can drown or ruin me.
Copyright ©
Kirby
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2004-07-21 11:42:19]
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Re: The Fire and rain
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by emeraldeyes on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:49:54 AM AEST
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| nice...i sense your hurt , love,and strength to overcome. good poem. |
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Re: The Fire and rain
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by pvd on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 10:11:09 PM AEST
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True feeling expressed plainly and simply. good emotional piece and equating love with lighting the beauty, power and sad aftermath
of a strike. Keep writing.
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