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Two
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 10:17:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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He is loving, caring, emotional
His touches leave my soul so full
He makes me want to dream again
To love again
To live again
You love me and you care for me,
But you have only lied to me
Bringing my anxiety back to me
Haunting me again
Killing me again
The choice it seems should be easy
The better one I see clearly
But emotions I know
Aren't that simple
And now because of
Two
I find myself torn in
Two
I felt like you were already gone
Nothing in your eyes for so long
This world would end it wouldn't take long
I opened myself to love again,
Fell for him
Your sadly fighting for me,
Now you let yourself back in
I don't want to hurt you,
I love you both so much
Even with you slipping in,
There's still something in his touch
He is how it's meant to be
Two become one,
An Angel sent to me
Why then am I torn in two?
Trapped in thoughts of him and you?
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_Raspberry_
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2004-07-21 10:17:08]
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Re: Two
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 10:29:57 AM AEST
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well written wonderful expression of feelings, but oh my, what a difficult place to be caught in; directly in your heart.........
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Two
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by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:58:40 AM AEST
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Wow....sometimes we are faced with very difficult decisions....wonderfully emotional verse....very well written.
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Re: Two
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by brew on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 12:00:29 PM AEST
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| Yes we can be torn between emotional decisions, but follow the HEART! Tha is what will make you , or break you! Nice writing |
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Re: Two
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:44:43 PM AEST
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very emotive write, sadness jumped out of the page at me, great expression,
pixie xx |
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Re: Two
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:54:04 PM AEST
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| To hell with love, baby... |
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