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Bleeding tears
Contributed by
gery_giggles
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 08:18:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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Am i the only one left in this place,
left to dream in black and white,
only to fall away in bleeding hearts.
Creating little angels
to carry me away,
brought a pain dreams can never erase.
I hoped to maybe find you there,
with open arms.
Ready to be the one i remembered.
The lose of you
tore my heart apart,
the memory of you caused a pain
beating hard on my soul.
Bleeding tears of blood down my cheek,
scar away a smile
only dreams can revive.
I live in a world where no more angels can fly.
Left to maybe one day
drown in my hoplessness.
To hold you again,
taste your lips,
kiss your heart is a virtue
the gods can never grant me.
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gery_giggles
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2004-07-21 08:18:09]
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Re: Bleeding tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:04:56 AM AEST
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beautifully written
kiss your heart is a virtue
the gods can never grant me.
great ending, very well done.
wildejohnny.
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Re: Bleeding tears
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by BrandySwanson on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:02:33 AM AEST
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beautiful poem great job
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Re: Bleeding tears
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by Black13 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:15:48 AM AEST
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This was beautifully done.
The flow and wording to it was awesome.
Very sad and... Don't know how to describe it.
I do know I liked it though.
Excellent write.
The first two lines though... |
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Re: Bleeding tears
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:51:44 PM AEST
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Awwww Gery *hugs to you* such a great poem, yet filled with sadness ..... thanks for being such a great friend to me,
talkecare
pixie xx |
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