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Red River
Contributed by
Ryoko
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 07:48:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I’m going to bleed a red river,
Spilling out who I am on a table,
Small tiny cuts release my life,
Slowly drifting me away.
Who’s going to save me this time?
I imagine it has to be myself again,
I can’t manage it a second time,
Not all alone.
Faded scars cover me emotionally,
Serious feelings trickle over them,
Blackened by your deceit,
Its made me simply numb.
Different changes swim around,
Enclosing on uncharted ground,
Black polish covers my nails,
Covering my heart as well.
Hidden rocks cut threw the blood,
Eroding away the muscle,
Rusty blades litter my floor,
A red river flowing from my veins
Copyright ©
Ryoko
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2004-07-21 07:48:54]
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Re: Red River
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 07:57:16 AM AEST
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Beautifully composed, so full of feeling and sad.
I know where you are coming from, All though we lead to different lives, and suffer from two different burning deceptions, it still amounts to the same in the end, the agony of betrayal really sux.
I'm sorry for your pain, and the hurt, but in time I hope you are able to heal and move on, I was able although I will bare the scars till the day I die.
Please look after yourself and take care.
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Re: Red River
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 08:01:10 AM AEST
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| so sad yet beutifully described |
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