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Untitled
Contributed by
MoonbeamBaby
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:57:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
scifi
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Why do we yell?
Why do we scream?
Don't you understand?
I'm only a human being
LOve me like you you did
two years ago
I need you bad
My heart hangs heavy and low
I cry you show no heart
YOu turn and say good by-e
I'm begging on my knees
My dreams have finally died
Copyright ©
MoonbeamBaby
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2004-07-21 02:57:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 07:34:28 AM AEST (User
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wow, I really liked this poem.
I loved the brevity of it and the fact that so much was said in so little...
Heartwrenching.
Great work!
and welcome to YPDC, the best poetry site on the planet!!!
Hope you stay with us for long, long time!
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