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Bleeding
Contributed by
nagina
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:12:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Dripping slowly
time ticks by
Standing here alone
I just ask why
Stabs in my back
from forgotten friends
Their piercing words
left in their hands
Holding lies and deceit
but trying to hide
They used their forked tongues
and took away my pride
My heart, breaking from my blindness
My blood, dripping out all my kindness
Bleeding tears, from sorrows kept in
Falling down my heart, evil wants to win
Life drains from my veins, because of their hate
Influenced to death, is my fate
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nagina
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2004-07-21 02:12:55]
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Re: Bleeding
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:20:25 AM AEST
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Nicely written....Been there.....but I never lost my pride!!
Jenni |
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Re: Bleeding
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 07:04:45 AM AEST
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| I have friends stabbing me too and it's hurts horribly, terribly till the extend no words could describe. Good write also for this. I hope to read more of your poems. I like your style of writing and will sure keep your site in scrutiny for new poems!! haha cya! |
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