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Love's Cost
Contributed by
nagina
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:49:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As a tear falls
a love dies
Forgotten and lost
filled with lies
Slowly descending
down a broken heart
Falls another drop
a love torn apart!
As a heart breaks
a life slowly fades
Growing duller
by hates blade
Bleeding for a time
now a failed romance
Slowly crumbling
without a chance!
As a soul mourns
a dream’s shattered
Lost forever
nothing else mattered
Slipping farther away
love is lost
Forever paying the penalty
of love’s cost!
Copyright ©
nagina
... [
2004-07-21 01:49:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love's Cost
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:19:04 AM AEST (User
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i have felt this pain as well, beautiful expression of feelings here:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Love's Cost
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ronald on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 07:02:12 AM AEST (User
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No one can deny the pain one receives after a breakup in a romance or a love affair. I also like this one. I really enjoy your poems. Great write!! Keep on writing pal! |
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Re: Love's Cost
(User Rating: 1 ) by theMoth on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:23:00 PM AEST (User
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So many good poems here. You get a "Groovy" from the Moth, babe. |
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