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From the Ashes
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:18:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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From the Ashes
My feelings
Are gone again
What I had before
Disappeared
Into nothingness
My feelings
Are against me
Another day I live
Emptiness fills me
I lost myself to be
Complete nothingness
Life is a waste
Death only escape
Life is a prison sentence
Keeping you locked away
What you make of life
Doesn't matter in spite
When you lose your sight
You lock yourself away
With no way to see
What the point of living is
My feelings to live
Have died again
As I watch the fire
My life ends
When it burns out
The silence so loud
From the ashes
I begin again
Another day
In this prison
From the ashes
I feel again
Another day
For my life to end
The flame burns out
The silence so loud
Completeness never found
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Re: From the Ashes
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:42:40 PM AEST
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awww...... so full of feeling, so heartfelt...... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: From the Ashes
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by blackholesun on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:44:25 AM AEST
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| i really like your poem i can relate,plus i like it because you didnt ryme everything its great!plz come read my poems and comment and rate? |
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Re: From the Ashes
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:24:41 AM AEST
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| This really was very well done..The flame burns out the silence is loud..I alwasy dig your way of getting ur work out here. |
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