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love (without me)
Contributed by
nate
on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:37:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I never meant to let you in,
but here you are right now.
I knew all i wanted was a friend,
but you got in somehow.
All passages led to the heart,
but i hoped that you'd get lost.
But you took every twist and turn,
in the right direction.
And in turn for that accomplishment,
I showed you my affection.
You took my love and turned it out,
and now you want to leave.
I'd follow you through hell and back,
but its time without, you need.
Being a man I guess I'll never understand,
the makings of a woman.
Construction is starting up again,
and its back to being lonely.
So once again my search begins,
for someone else to hold me. . . . .
Copyright ©
nate
... [
2004-07-20 21:37:28]
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Re: love (without me)
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:35:29 PM AEST
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this is beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: love (without me)
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by jeanie on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:00:20 PM AEST
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it's a good one, I like the contrast it's based on, i think I use kidna the same method ;)and an open end, good (y) nice nice, really :D
jeanie |
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Re: love (without me)
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by monophobic on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:57:22 AM AEST
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| i feel like i can relate extremely well with this. i never wanted to get into a relationship and right when i did (which takes a lot for me to do) the guy wanted to get out of it. i was completely heart broken.....i hope things will work out for you |
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