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The End
Contributed by
teagy03
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Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:34:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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What have I been doing?
Friendships end,
drills into my heart,
like a fine edged knife breaking new skin.
The family,
A great support group?
Huh!
Mum and dad hate each other.
Feel the need to kill,
Me,
Maybe,
Have tried before.
Pills, spills.
blood and air,
noose tight around my neck,
blue and gasp for air.
burn my skin,
nobody knows,
will I tell,
Only when my life finally ends.
Some people say i have the perfect family,
but they don't see behind the scenes,
the fights, the feelings,
the way we scream, and more.
***** my family,
they can go to hell,
and I will end my life,
when i get up the will.
Then they will know it has finally come...
THE END......
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teagy03
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2004-07-20 21:34:15]
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Re: The End
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by MLCstar on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:45:28 PM AEST
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| Fantastic display of anger. Isn't it so angering when people don't understand that your family is the opposite of what they think it is. Excellent poem. |
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Re: The End
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by Rhea on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:32:42 PM AEST
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| AWESOME! Very creative! |
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Re: The End
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 08:12:09 AM AEST
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Awesome poem, it was catchy and straight out, an in your face display of feelings, I liked it, and can sort of relate to what this poem means.
Awesome write, keep them coming and let your talent loose.
Take care
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