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Should Have Lied.
Contributed by
dusty
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Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:43:06 PM in AEST
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I really thought you'd understand,
Where exactly you and I stand,
I figured of all the people that I knew,
I had found an ally in you,
For me to confess, now that was hard,
You ignoring me is leaving scars,
I can't imagine why you don't call,
Did I screw up and ruin it all?
At least just tell me that I wrong,
Why are you making me wait so long?
If I was mistaken please let me know,
Then I can try and let it go.
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dusty
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2004-07-20 18:43:06]
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Re: Should Have Lied.
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 07:06:56 PM AEST
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OMG!! This can be so true....BUT I always tell the truth...no matter how much it hurt... and I have lost many a friend (Or so I thought) because of it......
Great write....
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Re: Should Have Lied.
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by Kirby on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 07:59:38 PM AEST
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This was a tottaly great poem and it is sooo true. Yet, I find myself hieding behind the wonderful web of lies! The truth will set you free. Love::::Kirby
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Re: Should Have Lied.
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by Babigurl on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:21:47 PM AEST
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| Beautiful it can not be expressed any better way your a wonderful writer |
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Re: Should Have Lied.
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by Chrissylee on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:45:41 PM AEST
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| even though the truth may hurt i have always found it is the better way to go... great write |
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Re: Should Have Lied.
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 12:22:56 AM AEST
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Funny... I was just having those "have I said too much" kind of thoughts today. The post-sharing worrying is so familiar to me. it's very well conveyed here. Nicely done.
Thanks for sharing this,
SNM |
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Re: Should Have Lied.
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by BrandySwanson on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:46:44 AM AEST
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this was so good I liked it, but always remember telling the truth in a relationship is always better than telling a lie. The old saying is honesty is the best policy.
Brandy |
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Re: Should Have Lied.
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:22:24 PM AEST
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| I really like this. it's pretty cool poem |
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