|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Puzzle
Contributed by
Am
on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:01:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
|
Like a jigsaw puzzle torn apart
Pieces of me lie on the floor
I really don't want you to know I'm broken
So please, I'm begging you, just shut the door
Leave me here in silence
Just to write my goodbye's
Letting go of the old me
As cold tears creep from my eyes
Remember the friends who were true
Remember the friends who were real
This whole time you taught me what not to do
But never taught me how to feel
Copyright ©
Am
... [
2004-07-20 18:01:36]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Puzzle
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:16:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| u may have only posted 2 poems, and mayb its the mood im in, but im deeply deeply impressed. the flow and feel of the poems is stunning, and the speak to me alot. mayb they speak to me, or mayb they speak to everyone and ur just really good... |
|
|
Re: Puzzle
(User Rating: 1 )
by SWAYLOS on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:23:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
HEY, I LIKE THAT ONE...IF YOU
WANT SUMTHIN TO CHEER YOU
UP , CHEK OUT MY NEW ONE
CALLED:"MY RHYMEZ IS DOPE!" |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
