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God's Angel For Me!
Contributed by
Babigurl
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Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 05:32:18 PM in AEST
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Togther we work things out,
Goods and bads,
Highs and lows,
Even when we dont know in what direction to go.
You are why I am alive,
Your the one who told me to strive,
I will never again be in that dark place,
Where I was only to see the devil's dark face,
You made my heart once again pick up its pace.
I am so thankful that you came into my life,
Without you i'd still be using that knife,
You are the one and only God sent down for me,
And he mad a very wise choice I agree..
By:Nicole Vassallo.
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Re: God's Angel For Me!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 05:26:37 AM AEST (User
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*smiles*
very soothing and peaceful poem.
You manage to convey your message to the reader somewhat with skill and a considerable flow throughout.
You expressed your feeling well in this one.
Great poem!
Keep it up!
_.:'~Katie~':._ |
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