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A suicide burden

Contributed by discantbelife on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:56:44 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

A suicide burden,
You have to know suicide thoughts are hurting.
This is the choice that not easy to make,
But this is the one that will take away the heart ache.
You have to plan,
When, where, and how,
You can't just go do it right now.
Alot of people are going to be hurt,
When they have to burie you in the dirt.
A suicide burden,
It's a selfish act,
You have to know there is no coming back,
The burden of it is not on you,
It's really what you about to do.
Deeper than cutting yourself,
It's the fact that you thought not even God could help.
A suicide burden,
No one will really shed a tear,
Cause YOU didn't even care.

Are you sure this is what you what to do?
Just because for a moment you stop loving you?
What about everyone else?
The ones you never really asked for helped
A suicide burden,
Your not the one your really hurting
Your mother, your father, your best friend,
But you don't care, this for you is the end.
Before you go killing yourself,
Why don't you stop writing and get some help,
Tell someone how you feeling,
You really just need God help and healing.
A suicide burden,
The thought of it is really hurting

Copyright © discantbelife ... [ 2004-07-20 15:56:44]
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Re: A suicide burden (User Rating: 1 )
by Babigurl on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 04:14:14 PM AEST
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1 thing to say ...BEAUTIFUL POEM

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