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She ...in my mind
Contributed by
Opium
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Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Her beauty and my admiration
Her laughters and my cries
Her lies and my deception
and my heart just dies
She lived my years and colored each day
but she had to leave, she couldn't stay
I loved her with all my heart and mind
but she had to leave, she didn't mind
When I thought you still care
You left me with these wounds to bare
Oh! how I long to see you for one more time
Eternal love was never meant to be a crime
No matter how hard I try, your love I'll never get
But I still see you in each sunrise and sunset
They say time is a perfect healer
and old blood is washed away
I say time is a heart stealer
my heart is still astray
And Peguy is no more, my love walked out the door
...and she'll never be returning
Scenes of nights before, aches my heart that's gore
...from tears my eyes are burning
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Re: She ...in my mind
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 09:58:20 AM AEST
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| WOW I AGREE WITH THIS IT WAS ONE YEAR ON THE 25TH THAT MY MOM PASSED & I FEEL TIME IS HARDER THAN ANYTHING!GOOD WRITE CHRISTINA |
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Re: She ...in my mind
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by OreO on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 10:29:37 AM AEST
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This is so full of love
and pain, good write.
Keep em' coming.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: She ...in my mind
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 05:48:54 AM AEST
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| ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT..........IM JEALOUS, WHO IS SHE :@......... :P |
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Re: She ...in my mind
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by gina on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 05:50:03 AM AEST
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| ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT..........IM JEALOUS, WHO IS SHE :@......... :P |
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Re: She ...in my mind
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 12:04:18 AM AEST
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| I was just passing by this site, but when I read your poem, I think I will sign in ...very insperational. |
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Re: She ...in my mind
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 04:10:36 AM AEST
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| Oh the pain that overwhelms us when we lose a love. You have put the feelings of heartache into words so eloquently. Great write! well done! :o) Larry |
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Re: She ...in my mind
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by gohar on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 04:14:37 PM AEST
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Your jealousy is by itself a great comment.
Ashraf Gohar Goreja
www.Goreja.com |
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Re: She ...in my mind
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by gohar on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 10:54:50 PM AEST
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Hello Larry,
I thank you for your beautiful comments.
Greetings
Gohar |
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Re: She ...in my mind
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by Mad-Mancunian on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 08:49:03 AM AEST
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The best love poems are the ones that deal with emotions, using only hints and similes.
Mon cher ami, since I find myself in the same position of the persona I'm giving you une grande cinque. |
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