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What my life and surroundings are made of
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:34:00 PM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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blue blood
crimson tears
ruined hope
hightened fears
heart of glass
life of stone
faith is to loose
my soul i dont own
friends of mist
family of fire
circling pain
tenderness turning to fire
i see it ahead
the great black hole
i step inside
my life is stole
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brokensoul
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2004-07-20 13:34:00]
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Re: What my life and surroundings are made of
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by darkplaidbabe on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:47:13 PM AEST
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i love this poem, its very beautiful and it flows surprisingly well considering the short lines. you are obviously very talented, i look forward to more poems from you.
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Re: What my life and surroundings are made of
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 06:49:58 AM AEST
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I agree...
A truly magnificent poem.
I just loved the brevity of it, and the impact it left within me...
Powerful stuff here.
Keep it up!
_.:'~Katie~':._ |
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Re: What my life and surroundings are made of
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by TwistedCage on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:38:57 PM AEST
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Nice flow...
Cage |
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