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Just Want To Curl Up With You
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:25:49 AM in AEST
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I am sorry about last night,
Just want to put all things right,
We belong together like you said,
Our love is far from dead.
Just want to curl up with you,
Feel our love that’s so true,
Try to get over this mountain,
Continue to bathe in our fountain.
I want you to hold out your arms,
Make my insides feel all calm,
Tell me that you will never leave,
Say you love me & make me believe.
All I want is to be by your side,
For this to become a smoother ride,
The rows are getting to us,
They’re beginning to cause too much fuss.
My heart is discoloured & black,
Pain has laid me out on my back,
I just need for you to help me,
Get back to where we used to be.
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pixie
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2004-07-20 11:25:49]
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Re: Just Want To Curl Up With You
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by _Raspberry_ on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:46:45 AM AEST
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| Pixie, this is yet another beautiful write. Things will probably never go back to the way that they used to be, but knowing your love is there can make things BETTER than they ever were. "Strength is born in the deep silence of long suffering hearts, not amidst joy" Your relationship is better because of these hard times, and if the love is there you can overcome all anger and depression. You are lucky that Mark understands these feelings that you have and is so supportive. Best of luck love, you will do great! |
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Re: Just Want To Curl Up With You
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:02:09 PM AEST
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This is the essence of poetry. The need to communicate deep feelings to someone close to you. Wonderful.
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Re: Just Want To Curl Up With You
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:11:36 PM AEST
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A beautiful sincere poem, wriiten from the heart.
Well done |
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Re: Just Want To Curl Up With You
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by emeraldeyes on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:39:50 PM AEST
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| i can feel this poem a little too much.....good job. |
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Re: Just Want To Curl Up With You
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by fastpitchqt on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:47:47 PM AEST
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| I can totally relate to this poem. I so much want for my ex to be back by my side, for all the crap and misunderstandings to be put behind us. But I dont know if it ever will. |
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Re: Just Want To Curl Up With You
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by brokensoul on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:53:22 PM AEST
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| awwwwwwwww i love this poem its so sad and sweet |
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Re: Just Want To Curl Up With You
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by WinterFawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:47:39 PM AEST
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Very loving write. Hang on if you love him...
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Re: Just Want To Curl Up With You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:22:37 PM AEST
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The ups and downs of depression. It hurts like hell, but bridges the gap of pain between you two.Strive for healing. Be there FOR each other. Be strong! Many blessings to you!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Just Want To Curl Up With You
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by pvd on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:50:59 PM AEST
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| Good love poem. You pour your heart and soul into your work . I hope your boyfiend can see this side of you. If not keep writing and spread your wings. |
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Re: Just Want To Curl Up With You
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 05:53:24 AM AEST
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| Welldone..it is a sincere heartfelt beautiful poem...venkat |
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Re: Just Want To Curl Up With You
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:29:01 AM AEST
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Beautiful words.
You have my prayers. I pray the best for you.
God bless you both. |
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