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Secret ways
Contributed by
Tanmaya
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Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:58:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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And all this time I wondered
how deep can love be…
I see the stars fall into
my soul tonight,
I am swept in by the sea.
Though the rains cut deep,
hope bleeds of hope.
Now I know,
our hearts will find their own way,
our hearts will know their own song.
There are secret ways
leading into blue skies…
And if you fall deeper
into the silence,
you will hold me in your
arms tonight.
Copyright ©
Tanmaya
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2004-07-20 00:58:22]
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Re: Secret ways
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by evilfairy on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:59:55 AM AEST
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| Beautiful stuff there Tanmaya :) |
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Re: Secret ways
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:18:09 AM AEST
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Wow..what a breath takingly beautiful poem.
very impressive..great read
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Re: Secret ways
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:31:51 AM AEST
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Another wonderful piece. This is very inspiring. Thank you for another beautiful read!
Andrew |
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Re: Secret ways
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:29:09 AM AEST
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so beautiful, wonderul images:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Secret ways
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:13:11 AM AEST
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This is the second poem you have posted and already i am a major fan.
This is very beautiful.
And i am in awe of your writing...
Brilliant. Keep writing, i will definatly keep reading.
Phil xxx |
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Re: Secret ways
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:17:42 AM AEST
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this poem made me cry as me and my bloke are going through a rough patch at the moment and I want him to hold me in his arms tonight too ..... beautiful write Tanmaya
pixie xx |
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Re: Secret ways
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:24:41 PM AEST
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Your work is very moving and full of vivid emotion. Your phrase "Though the rains cut deep, hope bleeds of hope." is so touching. I believe strongly in faith and hope. With no hope what reason is there to go on? Lovely, lovely work.
Rita |
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Re: Secret ways
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 04:02:32 PM AEST
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| You definately have a way with words....just wonderful! |
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Re: Secret ways
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 04:47:27 PM AEST
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"And if you fall deeper
into the silence,
you will hold me in your
arms tonight"
Beautiful, simply beautiful.
Take care. And may your arms not be empty tonight.
David |
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