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Dance With Me
Contributed by
Dusty
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:13:12 PM in AEST
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Dance With Me
Come on Baby, Take my hand,
Don't be shy, be my man,
If just for tonight while the music is playin'
If just for a moment, know what I'm sayin'?
Feel my body catch the sound,
Fly with me, don't look down,
Close your eyes, let everything go,
Move your body, feel the flow,
Live for tonight, leave the rest behind,
Because, for tonight, you're all mine,
In the cover of darkness, no one knows,
Behind these walls, anything goes,
Push me, Pull me, make me hot,
Bring me close, we won't get caught,
Tilt your head back, pull me in,
Bumping, grinding, sweat slick skin,
Come on Baby, Take my hand,
Don't be shy, be my man,
If just for tonight while the music is playin'
If just for a moment, know what I'm sayin'?
07/19/04
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Re: Dance With Me
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:14:19 AM AEST
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Very beautiful......flowed like a song in my heart.... I loved it....
Jenni |
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Re: Dance With Me
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by emeraldeyes on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:26:18 AM AEST
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| Very nice! Sounds like a song to me! Keep it up. |
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Re: Dance With Me
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:39:43 AM AEST
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whoo whoo lol, this is really sooo sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Dance With Me
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:04:31 AM AEST
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The words flow really well in this.
Quite sweet. |
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Re: Dance With Me
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:29:43 AM AEST
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wonderful poem....
pixie xx |
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Re: Dance With Me
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:31:09 AM AEST
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I just had to read your poem after seeing the title. I had a great dream about dancing last night and although it wasn't the bump-n-grind kind it was romantic.
Your poem was so upbeat and just brought a smile to my face to read. Loved it.
Kie : ) |
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Re: Dance With Me
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:23:48 PM AEST
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| L.O.L Cool Poem |
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