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STOP WAITE;
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:24:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Bus stop
stock drop,
people shouting watch out.
yes am out
smoke scream,yes am clean
what is wrong with this seen
mind blown
down stream, people runing
not me please.
gun,gun,gun,pop,pop,pop,pop
shot firred all stop.am so angry about this stuff.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
... [
2004-07-19 22:24:42]
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Re: STOP WAITE;
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:49:31 AM AEST
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oh yes richard, this is awful, good message, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: STOP WAITE;
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 07:26:11 AM AEST
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Wow!! The reality of life and the streets, very succinct without getting too wordy. Nice.
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