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Mr. Rite
Contributed by
punkprincess6689
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:16:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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star light
star bright
where is mr. rite????
you'd have spikey hair
and always care
you'll have blue eyes
and would never make me cry
if we would fight
you would call the same nite
and say u were wrong
it wouldnt be long
before we would talk again
but this isnt the deal
this guy aint even real
i made this up in my mind
and now i have to leave this behind
never to find mr. rite
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punkprincess6689
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2004-07-19 22:16:14]
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Re: Mr. Rite
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by emeraldeyes on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:55:54 PM AEST
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| ah-I don't believe this at all! You just haven't met him yet!! Keep writing, girl! |
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Re: Mr. Rite
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:51:04 AM AEST
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awww you will someday, this poem is wonderfully written and so heartfelt, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Mr. Rite
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:38:45 PM AEST
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| Kim You'll Met Him One Day. You're Still Young. Keep Writing |
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