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My Beautiful Little one
Contributed by
twisterchaser
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:30:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As the twilight falls and all around nature calls,
I see the majestic mountains, and hear the magnificent water falls. Dew is glistening on the soft new cut grass,
the moon is shimmering on the lake; it looks like glass.
A shooting star lites a streak across the sky,
however it is her quiet beauty that makes me high.
Her soft red lips, the wind blows her hair, her dark eyes and skin so fair.
The slight scent of her lingers in the night air.
Why do I call her my beautiful little one?
Beside her even the beauty of a Rose pales, Her mind is beautiful, her body sexy and in a word; what can compete with her beauty? None
Sweet dreams my beautiful little one!!!!!
Sweet Dreams
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twisterchaser
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2004-07-19 21:30:20]
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Re: My Beautiful Little one
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by Dusty on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:42:20 PM AEST
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Simply beautyful. Great write.
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Re: My Beautiful Little one
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:50:00 PM AEST
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awww!! this is sooo sweet!!! your such a beautiful soul and a brilliant writer andy:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My Beautiful Little one
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:54:40 PM AEST
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Really lovely!!!
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Re: My Beautiful Little one
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by Seans_Girl on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:54:38 AM AEST
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That was so sweet!! Great imagery!
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Re: My Beautiful Little one
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 07:31:00 PM AEST
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this is a refreshingly romantic write - lovely words, very descriptive. well done
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