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I Want To Be Free
Contributed by
Babigurl
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:09:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I feel like a prisoner,
You wont let me out and about,
If you dont let me free,
When I get older I wont know who I am or what to be,
You keep me captured in this case,
Away from the whole human race,
I want to be free.. let me learn my own ways,
For if you keep me here i'm telling you I wont be here then next day,
I will be gone up in heaven where I am to be free
,
Where there is no body to be like the old me...
By:Nicole Vassallo
Copyright ©
Babigurl
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2004-07-19 20:09:19]
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Re: I Want To Be Free
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by TheVoice on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:43:46 PM AEST
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nicole,
i do not pretend to know your situation, but going to heaven is not the answer to be free. it will come in time, you already have a good start with the internet, it is a good way to find out alot about the world. patience is difficult, but well worth it.
the voice
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Re: I Want To Be Free
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:04:30 PM AEST
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