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Apart
Contributed by
Tigerpaws
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 07:37:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Where to start
You broke my heart
And tore it apart
Forgotten like all your worries
I don't want to hear all your sorries
You think you're so bold
But really your heart is cold
Your soul is so lost
And this will certainly cost
Like an old habit, I was used
I don't understand, there's no excuse
You don't care that my tears flow
And I hate seeing you always glow
Everytime I see you my hate gets stronger
The more I see you it just last longer
You're always on my mind
And I wonder why
Maybe because you were that special guy
I pray to the Lord,
Please take that sword
That was put in my heart
To tear it apart
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Tigerpaws
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2004-07-19 19:37:02]
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Re: Apart
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:11:09 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Tigerpaws! Such a sad, heartbreaking first post! *sigh*
You will find that many of the poets here suffer from the same affliction. Ah! - the broken heart... so terribly painful, but so wonderfully inspirational in terms of poetry. And, at YPDC, the lovely bonus is that when you drop a sad, melancholy poem - you often find a lot of care, concern and support.
Please do settle in and stay a while - It is awfully nice to have you join us,
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Re: Apart
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:34:41 PM AEST
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wow, a very gripping poem.
"Everytime I see you my hate gets stronger
The more I see you it just last longer"
I know this feeling very well. this is a great poem and a nice way to make an entrance. welcome to YPDC. I look forward to your future additions....A++++ |
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